 Kay Harlow 2003-12-14 . chapter 1That was excellent. The words painted this strong, incredibly vivid imagery that I rarely see to that degree in some poems. You did an amazing job. |
 Transparent Cherub 2003-12-08 . chapter 1your imagery is great...this is an intensely wonderful poem. nice work.
~jrl |
 PainKiller 2003-12-02 . chapter 1Intensely wonderful poem... I love the sentiments in this. The 'consuming love' theme was not trite, the way you conveyed it. Great work! |
 Seras Nova 2003-11-26 . chapter 1This was an...unique and interesting poem. I like.
Keep writing and sorry for the bad review!
-Seras |