That was excellent. The words painted this strong, incredibly vivid imagery that I rarely see to that degree in some poems. You did an amazing job.

your imagery is great...this is an intensely wonderful poem. nice work.
~jrl

Intensely wonderful poem... I love the sentiments in this. The 'consuming love' theme was not trite, the way you conveyed it. Great work!

This was an...unique and interesting poem. I like.

Keep writing and sorry for the bad review!

-Seras