I remember when u were writing this! well i dunno if u were writing it at the time, but i remeber it when it was on a piece of paper and i had a hard time reading ur handwriting! oh, those precious memories! lol

I liked this one line esp. "Displaying its fragile light to the world"
it's like a hyperbole of fragile light and hope the the world...
this is a nice poem.
hope to read more from you!