Hey this is pretty good, you have some gramattical errors but I would like to see the end of this story. please write more.

~Seth~

Cool. Coulda done without the, uh, dream, but i guess some peoples subconcious is like that... n-ewho good chapter (need to make longer, pleze!)

very clever with your words and ways... havent changed a bit. lol I cant wait to read more :D

Sweet. I look forward to the next chapter.
~DB

OMG! that's it? you can't just stop in the middle f a story and leave everybody hangin! jks jks but i do look forward to readin the rest :D well keep writing i promise i'll keep reading!
miss ya lots xoxoxo

Hehe... Funny. I predict that, once he gets to know Jayne better, he's gonna end up liking her and go out with her instead. Then again, he may not. But maybe Jayne likes him... and Charleen likes Damien... that would be halarious, but so life-like at the same time. Anywho, i'm rambling.
keep up the good writing :D
~Code Ninja
aka DragnBreth

DUDE!! WRITE MORE! PLEZE!! (srry, couldn't help myself) But, you need to write the next chapter. you can't just leave me hanging. What happens next? Does he get his girl? Does he get the one Damein wants? Does Damein get his girl? They are questions, questions that need answering. oh and the color thing is very true. (i should know) :D
~DB

Whoa, dude, nice story so far. You've got yerself a natural writting tallent.
~DragnBreth
Story: The Team of Extraordinary Mutants (supernatural/fantasy)