why the cliff hangers? why? I love cliff hangers but not when I'M not writing them. other than causing me many sleepless nights wondering what will happen, good work! keep it up.

nice start!" can't believe I'm going to attempt this again, meaning doing two stories at once. AH! Stress. But I did it last year so I'll be ok, " and we all know how that ended!
keep up the good work

well i guess i'd better start telling people that this story is up...to bad it's thankgiving break and i'm home...with nothing to do but homework and writing stories...and, oh sorry. i'll write more when i get the chance and,...well...the ideas too:)