Again, I feel trapped. Not very reassuring, this poem, but still wonderfully set up. Great!

I feel I cannot place an adequate comment for this poem. Suffice it to say it moved me.

Two Words: Damned Good.

Man Jess! You have talent. I like how you talk about being bound in love, but at the same time how there is another side to it and that it comes with the territory no matter what. It's truly beautiful.

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very moving. I liked how the idea of the poem was kept throughout the whole thing. many other people eventually fade off into completely irrelevant means. well done

p.s. ty for the many review glad to know you enjoyed my ficion.

WOW! Awesome poem...really pretty!