This was absolutely cute! Good job! Hehe you know whats funny? I'm A lot like Spin, I don't well with drama and seeing how she dealt with those situations was funny!(^-^) good job my friend, now I'll read your sequel!

Haha. That was really cute! xD I liked this depiction of Santa and his elves. :] Nice job.

You called Jared Cale.

I TOTALLY JUST REMEMBERED HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS STORY! PIXY-DIZZY, YOU"RE THE BEST!:):):):)

Hi there!
Totally cute story... :)
BTW, looks like you mixed up your characters:
“Don’t bother.” Cale pushed the wing through the ice before bending down to cut the bottom.

Cale doesn't belong in this story :)

thia rocks

Shouldn't there be elf labour or somthing?!?!
:0
Bad Santa!!I shall send you coal on Christmas!!
COOKIES!!
Heres some choc chip cookies

"Unfortunately for me, a couple of weeks ago, I told Santa that maybe it would be better for both him and the other elves if he could get down here and help out a little, instead of being a couch potato and sitting on his ** all day.

I don't think he liked that.

So guess who's stuck doing Christmas Duty this year"

--That's so cute! I Loved this chapter-very sweet sounding story

Hello... I would like to say that I really enjoy your stories. They are quite entertaining, but can you quit inserting your Author's notes every where in the middle of a story? It is really quite irritating. It distracts the reader from the storyline and seems quite juvenile actually.
Sorry to say but, no one really cares what the author feels at a certain point in the story and it is as they say 'ACBC'. 'Act Cute Buey Cute' or you're acting in a very cute manner but it really comes off as not cute at all. If you truly cannot resist having irritating comments, at least place it at the end of the story, so that the reader can enjoy your works thoroughly without interuptions.
As much as this seems like a flame, it's not. It's just that I've been reading your stories and they irritate me to the point that I can't help but comment about it. Hope you take this into consideration. Thanks.

I love your writing... it makes me go bonkers. Yup, but that's WAY beside the point.

This was amazing, I love the idea of an abominable hot snow man. The whole story was great-perhaps, a chessy ending but I live for those lol.

I loved it... your whole world and setting was amazing. I would have never thought of cows as guard dogs... they would be good.

Yeah well I hope you update "to figth or to fall" because I can't wait longer... SERIOUSLY... so if you have the time WRITE... but I can wait-meh probably not but for your story I'll try.

Hehe, I started this one like a year ago, then high school marching band started and I had no time for anything, but I finally finished and it was a great story! Keep writing!

i luv it already!

LOL. This was so funny. I loved the ending too, good job^-^

Very cute :)

Aww :) I think you're the first fantasy writer I've come across here, and I like your humor, haha.

This story was really... sweet? :) I liked it a lot. And I think you were really imaginative, taking the thing with Christmas and elves and making it a story all your own. So awesome :)

I liked Jared from the start (don't know why), and same with Spin. The reindeer were funny, and I love how you made the Abominable Snowman's descendant "Abe", haha.

Anyway... very nice ;) Thanks for a funny and sweet read!