|Reviews for Does It Really Matter?|
| Trey1 3/10/04 . chapter 40
Hey. This story is very very good. I can see the characters very vividly in my head, which is rare for me since I usually focus more on the plot than the characters. You did a good job matching up looks, personalities, thoughts, etc. The only problem I can see is a few typing/grammar errors or the wrong words and names in some places, but it is usually only one or two a chapter so it is understandable. I do them all the time...causes problems in school. ;)
One thing I will say is that while I can appreciate that you want people to review your story, you should try just writing for the sake of writing. You are a very good writer, but I think you are looking for other people to confirm this too much. Would you rather have someone read your story and review and then stop thinking about it because they've said what they wanted to say or would you rather have people read your story and walk away thinking about it and interpreting it for themselves. You've made it so that it is fun to analyze; the characters' relationships and interaction is very interesting. I know that when I stopped in chapter 30-something and went to the store, I thought about it a lot. I'm reviewing at the end now just to tell you that writing is self-expression with the key word being "self". Don't worry about who is reading it and what they think. Write for yourself. :)
| BlackPanther02 3/10/04 . chapter 40
yay! update! larissa's not my favorite character eiher, but this chapter let us see what was in her head, and i think thats important. update soon! i want to see more ayla and randy!
| WolfDemoness89 3/10/04 . chapter 40
wont review... WONT REVIEW YOU SAY . well, yeah lmao, but hey, denisse likes ure story, adn she doesnt have an account so she told me to review for her .. uhh GREAT STORY -from denisse -.-; lol well, i am tyring to get ppl to read, but the world has gone down the drains i tell u.. ah, marquia likes ure poems, she doesnt have an account either. And i couldnt review for her cuz already reviewed the poem n it wouldnt work, so she said that they r very good, she loved them, Mira was in love with the 'until tomorrow my someone' one and wow im telling u , u got talent, ure gonna go places , ure my freaking idol . marquia says ,like, the same thing. lol bye TyAnna keep the great work up kk?
| TruthSpeaker 2/29/04 . chapter 39
Wow...just wow. Once I started I couldn't stop. I can understand and see how and why you're so proud of this. It's so good! Keep it up
| BlackPanther02 2/27/04 . chapter 39
i really like this story. ayla and randy are a very cute couple. i can totally relate to ayla. i'm half white half black too and some black people don't like me because i'm friends with white kids and some white kids don't like me just because they think i'm black. i don't usually go for slash, but jalil and jace are cute together. and nykell is a really cute character, she reminds me kinda of me(except for the skipping a grade part). update soon...this story is interesting.
| Aubreys-Master 2/27/04 . chapter 39
Okay, I am going to review this time. UPDATE! Now, that's done. Follow my orders and bow down to your Mistress! Ha.
Mistress of Goth
| Depressed Sweden-Lover 2/10/04 . chapter 39
Hey. Well, I just spent the last three days reading your story, and I love it. I'll admit I don't really support homosexuality, but I love what ur doing with Jace and Jalil. I think my fav character would have to be Larissa though, though I really don't know why. LOL.
| WolfDemoness89 2/7/04 . chapter 39
Hi Ty! ,YOU ROCK yet agin another briliant chap, hats off to you Ty.. i will wait till the next chap as long as i have to lol i cant wait to see it though . imma buy all ure books LOL i am still obsessed.. and i like the idea with randy and ayla. i just Knew it MUHAHA Bye Ty!...*giggle*
| snickers 2/6/04 . chapter 39
Great chapter! I really liked your ideas for this one; how Ayla got a taste of what it was like to be Randy. They are perfect for each other!
I know u are busy at the moment so update as soon as you can. -
| Sidewalks 2/6/04 . chapter 39
I'm unforgiveable. I've been reading this story from the beginning and just realised I never even reviewed once. Sorry, sorry. I was sure I had. You have good characterisation in the story, most of the characters are endearing (I fail to like Larissa and Nykell all that much but that's surely due to unrelating factors) and the different pov's work tip-top. I know you're already done with the story but yeah.. keep writing anyway.
| snickers 2/4/04 . chapter 38
Hi, I jus read the last couple o chapters. I especially liked 37. Can't wait to read about Ayla and Randy! update soon :)
| wolfdemoness89 2/4/04 . chapter 38
its me rach again, didnt wanna sign in.. i am soo lazy... BUT I LIKE THE CHAP... jace and jalil have sum problems but itll be okay i think? is that a grin i see on ure face? i think it is MAUHAHAAHH well yea i am just bored and i still love ure story! so keep it up and update soon .
| Santurion 2/3/04 . chapter 37
Is it me or did you update two chapters this time? Anyway, I liked them both. You're doing good job. _ Oh, and when is going to come Randy/Ayla? And please, more Jace/Jalil!
| WolfDemoness89 2/3/04 . chapter 37
hey GREAT CHAP update soon lol -Rachel
| Lucky 2/2/04 . chapter 22
hey! I just started reading your story and it is AWESOME! I am addicted! (which might be bad since i read your story instead of doing homework .