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| ludicrous louie 2005-04-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseThats mean...im never going to cook crab alive again! |
| A-wolf-called-Skya 2004-04-14 ch 1,  | abuseHi! i got what you mean, and the evil person was the person cooking it, i bet? the went off a bit, but just enough for you to tell. that was all i noticed, besides everyonce and awhile you missed adding a comma at the end of one of the lines. Ch.9's up. Why'd you think he's a DRAGON? *bonks you on head, giggling* that will go in my funniest reviews EVER book. "Is Tyrael a drtagon?(weirdness). . ."lol!! rofl. anyway, i hope you distinguish now that he is not a dragon, nor a reptile, this time. and that another person is(sort of) lol! and you know what person i'm talking about, when you see this character. though i'm not saying anything about her and the commander in this story until her's is done. ttyl! -Rachel. |
| amazingblazes 2004-03-17 ch 1, | abuse*mocks PETA people* Aw...you cruel mean mean person! How could you write about about such a tragic thing as an innocent animal losing its life! You are a heartless bag of cement on a basement floor that hasn't been washed for many many moons. *ceases mocking* Actually, that was semi-brilliant. I don't think I've ever seen a poem about crabs before... |
| Windplayer 2004-02-06 ch 1, anon. | abuse(._.) sniff...nice poem...I guess...you DO know who I am right? |
| amethystdawn 2004-01-05 ch 1, | abuseEvil cook. -_- Poor crab. P.S Thanks for the review. ^_^ |
| topaz07 2003-12-05 ch 1, | abuseScary!! I love it though! It's creepy and true! It really freaked me out!! |
| Special Ed 2003-11-23 ch 1, | abuselol. I will never eat crabs the same way again. ^_^ I liked it *claps* buh bye. (thnx for reviewing my poem) |