Thats mean...im never going to cook crab alive again!

Hi! i got what you mean, and the evil person was the person cooking it, i bet? the went off a bit, but just enough for you to tell. that was all i noticed, besides everyonce and awhile you missed adding a comma at the end of one of the lines.
Ch.9's up. Why'd you think he's a DRAGON? *bonks you on head, giggling* that will go in my funniest reviews EVER book. "Is Tyrael a drtagon?(weirdness). . ."lol!!
rofl.
anyway, i hope you distinguish now that he is not a dragon, nor a reptile, this time. and that another person is(sort of) lol!
and you know what person i'm talking about, when you see this character. though i'm not saying anything about her and the commander in this story until her's is done.
ttyl!
-Rachel.

*mocks PETA people* Aw...you cruel mean mean person! How could you write about about such a tragic thing as an innocent animal losing its life! You are a heartless bag of cement on a basement floor that hasn't been washed for many many moons. *ceases mocking* Actually, that was semi-brilliant. I don't think I've ever seen a poem about crabs before...

(._.) sniff...nice poem...I guess...you DO know who I am right?

Evil cook. -_- Poor crab.
P.S Thanks for the review. ^_^

Scary!! I love it though! It's creepy and true! It really freaked me out!!

lol. I will never eat crabs the same way again. ^_^ I liked it *claps*
buh bye.
(thnx for reviewing my poem)