Yes! You rock! I have read a number of your stories at and you mentioined that we should check out this story, soi did, I was not let down. This is a great story. The ending was so cute, too. Wonderful job is all I can really say.

I really liked this, but I was wondering if you were planning on flushing Ian and Ash out a little more, maybe in a sequel of sorts?

This was amazing! It was sweet, well-written, great plot, lovable characters... (sigh) perfect. I'm still smiling after having read this. Are you going to write any more stories?

*jumps up and glomps Shinji* KAWAII! /\_/\ lol I LOVE it so far! *still reading it* You're a great writer! *hints of jealousy* lol

Aw! Kawaii desu! -

It's a good story, as I've said many a time. But when were you normal or sane?

Hey, good job on the best rejection letter by a publisher ever. (They were bastards...you need to be published!)

This story rocked, im totally shocked you havnt had more reviews! dam good work, Awsome storyline and everything! thanks ,bye

It's so beautiful, Shinji! I hope to see more works from you in the future.

YAY! I love this! How perfectly wonderful! I smiled so much my cheeks hurt! But its a good hurt! YAY! Wonderful writing!

Hey, that was an excellent story! I liked the ending, but I kept expecting Jared to come back. I'm glad he didn't. Anyway, I think it was a great story and you should definitely continue writing. See ya Tuesday. Jess

z00t, the end indeed. that was a beautiful story. loved the ending, give you the feeling that the characters will be alright even if we aren't going to be watching/reading their every move. i hope you write more.

yay! another chapter, you're chapters are great because they're so long. this was a good one, a sudden change in senery for a bit. a great chapter as always, keep it up.

Great. Just great. I really hope he dies or gets castrated. ;-)

plez plez hurry on the next chapter with this storyif at all posibel a faithfull reader