| Reviews for A Bird |
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Jonathan Kimberley 2/25/06 . chapter 1i love it, it really made me laugh. i don't useually like haiku poetry, but this one is different to ones i have read before, i like it better ) well done |
Manju 8/24/05 . chapter 1haha funny. love the last line. lol |
Dying Without Gackt 12/14/04 . chapter 1Ha I liked the last line, that was funny. |
joie 610 7/15/04 . chapter 1haha, i liked the last part. interesting! |
Eckrice 3/9/04 . chapter 1haha Feathery butt. I likes it. Too stort though. Add another stanza. May your onions stay sweet, -Eckrice |
FurballofEvilness 2/19/04 . chapter 1what fun. keep writing! |
Faded Soulfire 2/13/04 . chapter 1This poem is so cute! It brought a smile to my face. Normally, I don't read haiku, but i'm starting to enjoy it now. Besides, i have to write a haiku poem for my english class and I must say yours was truly inspirational. _ maybe I'll come up with a good one myself. Great poem! |
The L1zard Queen 2/5/04 . chapter 1Aww, lol feathery butt :B |
lebuffle 1/6/04 . chapter 1Lol! That's cute! The last line rocks! |
Veromorphia 12/28/03 . chapter 1It's cute! _ I like the "trademark feathery butt" part. Nice work! Veromorphia |
TiEka Koniku 12/10/03 . chapter 1butts rule! lmao. thanx for the complement on my penname. it Japanese.. my nick really. but i love it. keep up the writing. it definately entertaining. *TI* |
Melancholy Butterfly 12/7/03 . chapter 1Hehehe. . . this little piece of writing is so cute! Especially the last line, "Trademark feathery butt", that gave me the giggles! Well done! |
QueenRemge13 12/7/03 . chapter 1LOL, LOL, LOL. :-P QR |
Lucy Ricardo 11/30/03 . chapter 1that's pretty good. Short, but good. |
swift sky silver 11/28/03 . chapter 1lol, melikes. you gotta keep writing haikus0) |