That leaves a really unpleasant taste in my mouth. It's actually... quite chilling. The title puzzles me a little bit; I'm not sure, maybe something slightly different? But I can see that this would be hard to give a title too. Yet, it isn't really a ramble. It works.
*arrogance
amelia 2003-11-23 . chapter 1
for a generic ramble, it was great. the one thing that bothered me was the way you said "silvered silverware." isn't it already implied that silverware is silver?