i figured it was time to comment :) I've been an avid fan of all of your stories and pieces of writing for awhile. They are truly amazing! Anyway, i read this piece because I was curious as to what insight you gained from the Crucible. I read it earlier this year for school and i really enjoyed it. Great job with this piece. While, I like the character of Goody Proctor and disliked Abagial, i always thought Abagial really did love John and felt that her condemning people was justified. Again, you did a great job in developing her motives and justifications.

heh i like this a lot. yeah definite good insight. congrats on the mark!! short is always good, too, and for some reason i find it harder to write. =) kudos. and i've updated, btw
~k8

It did deserve an A+! Now see, people like yu writting these things so well is why I don't write as someone else.