HAH! PRINTED IT! TOOK ME TWENTY THREE PAGES OF PAPER, BUT I PRINTED IT! (expect a running commentary when next you see me)

oh i wish i could write stories **grumbles about writers block**

you're good... stop that! lol

There is still more to come I am guessing, it is VERY good so far, in fact awesome. One thing I really don't like the word irked, especially in the context that you are using it in.
TTFN MY MELON

My god woman! YOU write too good. I can't write Fantasy at all. Unless you count dear Arlyn.
You ARE Tolkien, aren't you? Like, reborn?
I can just see you with a pipe.


FRODOLYN

wow your a fantastic writer, i think that your amazing and i cant wait until you put your next chapter up, tear its so beautiful!