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| Covetous 2004-02-20 ch 1, | abuseWow, awesome! This story is a study in uniqueness. I hardly ever see stories written in the second person, and almost never from the viewpoint of an old man. I can really identify with it, too, because I'm a middle child, the second of three girls. Right on! |
| You Need More Flair 2003-11-23 ch 1, | abuseI have middle child syndrome myself, so I understand. This was a very nice, albeit short piece of writing. Very good work. |