wonderful poem. i love the rhyme scheme, once again, and the imagery. graphic and descriptive, very nice. i like this type of poetry a lot. great job. keep up the excellent work!

The rhythm in this is really appealing, but something about the last line of the second stanza seems a bit off-- I think it's a little too long, and doesn't fit the rest of the poem well. Other than that, this was enjoyable-- I liked seeing the fox hunting for once, instead of the other way around. ^_^

In every stanza the first and third lines are really great, but the second sounds as if you're trying to fit it into the poem, instead of the words/lines flowing smoothly. - Kishana

Wow, great imagery! Especially the first stanza. Very good work, I like it.

cool, I like how it takes me into the hunt. good job