O.O It's so...yayness...^^ New adjective haha
I likey this. Nice formatting, and love the detached feeling the speaker seems to have about love... It's so...wonderful. Another fave. ^^
~ Kit ~

Yup, more good stuff. End of third paragraph is well put. Love is love regardless of anything. The imaginary audience is nice. Just a touch of voyeurism never goes astray.
Well done, again.

Yes, again beautiful. Plus, your poems are the first love poems I've came across in awhile, where I didn't barf at how cheesy they were. Yours aren't chesy at all, yours are intriguing. Too bad I can't write pure love poems... but I like my style of tortured love =D
Tokiko