great work!

it seemed to get a lttile repetative. I think it can be better, but it's still okay. Keep trying, keep living, keep living

reminds me of some of my friends. Nice writing

so beautifully described, the want to repair a damaged friendship can be hard to express correctly but you do it very well. I love it this one is going on my fav. list.

i loved it...great job...continue your work with pride

well, if i wasn't ice eyes, i would have cried. this... wow. that 'but' changed the whole thing, i can't even BEGIN to explain how much i can understand this. this...this... is brilliant. i wish more people knew what i felt, without knowing it was me. (even if this happened to you!)
kendra
aka: loves-first-kiss

awesome poem! i can relate all too well... good job keep up the good writing! =)