Guess who? Yea stephy told me to review, and I really loved this poem. Very e.e. cummings, if you will. keep writing!

I like how you mix the positive emotions and negative emotions words are meant to stir. A strong ending and great emphasis by spacing or italicizing.
Good poem.

Izzy J.

that was an excellent peice of writing, I'll check out some more of your stuff

This poem is so good. I don't even know where to start.

I love the title and the whole idea of it. It's actually reminiscent of The Ring from LOTR at the moment - "tempting me/enticing me" - very powerful and seductive.

Great poem! Wonderful!