 Hexic 2004-01-01 . chapter 1no one can understand them huh? or is that what you would like to think?
1st- guilt? abuse? anyhow it goes deep into the herat of the reader- makes you think.
2nd- maybe a battle between the person? no agreeing or something? this one also makes you think, to me it's a painting of feelings... but to someone else it could be anything.
4th- a friend leaving? betraying?
5th- hiding from someone, or trying to be let free? |
 Fabian Cortez 2003-11-23 . chapter 1Some absolutely wonderful Ideas & Descriptions, some start off very well, lose there way a bit and then pick up again others are perfect as they are.
All together Very WELL DONE
KEEP WRITING!
Above is just an opinion, you can check out mine if you like.
F.C |