 Vexed and Tired 2006-06-29 . chapter 1Your poem seems written from the heart and it's about a subject which a lot of people can empathise with.
I like the line: it's not like this kind of stuff ever happens tome. ( such a lie (
nice. |
 Mythers 2005-06-15 . chapter 1the last stanza is very good. I liked this. |
 kittyshina15 2003-11-24 . chapter 1 I'm actually a very happy person most of the time...most of that is what happens on my usual bad days which dont happen that often thank goodness...thanks for the reviews...
The aspiring Actress/ Artist~ kittyshina15 |
 Gundam Fan 2003-11-24 . chapter 1 sounds like you have a lot of problems with your friends and life. maybe you should talk to a counselor.you dont seem happy.
that's life tho.
nice job. |
 jab 2003-11-23 . chapter 1Ah life.
You describe it well.
Nice work! |
 Lord Serebi 2003-11-23 . chapter 1 oh yeh, thats deep |