this is deep, and well executed. and i like the idea that you used your own pen name. i wrote a poem on my penname too! . ?storyid1608819
keep on writing

I like your name and I like the poem. The whole idea of chained freedom is, shall I say...poetic.

this poem of yours is quite deep...but i like it nontheless! i don't really understand it that well..but good enough. i can tell what you wanna say.. keep up the good work!