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M. I love that Di. Feels like it's oozing blue cotton candy.
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Lovely way to end. Perfect, even.
I think this is a great style for you, I'd like to see more in the same kind of direction. I don't consider it odd at all. The length is just right.

I LOVE IT!
It's amazing! Really, it's so wonderful...great images.

** me. Beautiful. Very heartfelt.

aw how sweet

This is good. I really like it when people do poems like these. The poems that paint perfect pictures of the scene in your mind. Colorful. Keep up the good work. *K

I don't have any idea why this is so damnably appealing to me, but it is. Great job. Keep writing.

~Gabby

very cute and an original concept to write something so short. The difficulty with writing a very short piece is that evey word must be chosen perfectly and i think you've achieved that. Nice imagery, very vivid.

Aw, that was really sweet, and realy beautifully written. I would sleep with you.

awesome