ahh this is scaring me...mostly because i have a friend named robert snow...AH mes scared now...lol good writing tho!

omg wowo...i loved it it was amazing!
plz come rate my stuff, just click my name

I liked it! Nice flow of things, very realistic, could happen to anyone. That's why I don't go out on Halloween- not because of the weather, but because of the scads of stupid people in my town. Nice job, I'll have to look at your other stories.

(btw, thanks for reviewing, though that is the end of Custodian. it's.. um.. open to interpretation. Yep. Oh, and if you have a minute or ten, could you maybe read through my new story Sandgap?)
now, the review.
awesome story, and I have to agree... the ending is kick-**. Br. spooky. Now hurry up and get those other two stories posted!

Wow, this is an excellent story. It's just right- creepy, but not too creepy...with cliffhangers in the best places. Great work and thanks for the reviews. I'll be sure to read what you upload next.

Wow...
Nice, Chris, nice. I really liked this. I'll admit, going into the second chapter I was well...not very enthused, but you really brought it together. I enjoyed this a lot. It's a good read. And thank you for the mention of the "Cherry Red" pickup truck...it brought a smile to my face. heehee. Your nickname shall forever be, in my book, Cherry Chris. You can only blame yourself, you brought it about.
Anyway, good story. I loved it. Keep up the good work.
~Kari

Kick ** ending, Chris. Very cool indeed. I personally loved this story.
Like AAron said, you've got great style.

I was horrified at myself for not commenting on this ealier. I thought I had, but then realized that this was also from the DA Meeting. I'm a dork.
Anyways, I really enjoy the beginning of this story. I got a very good 'mystery' vibe from it, which I'm all for. Good flow and voice. I'm going to wait to read the second part until the DA meeting, but after that I'll comment on it.