As weird as this story was, I absolutely loved it. It's 100% creative, unpredictable, and hilarious. Awesome job! Keep writing!

personally it wasnt my favorite, during the end it actually got kind of dull. ive seen you do better.
Tommy D.

Oh... This whole thing was just a sting oflaughs from beginning to end. With, of course, one or two semi-serious moments, but... you get the idea. I loved this one, and I'm off to read its... predecessor? Well, anyway... Good job!

That made me giggle. Especially the frisbee.

Whee! This is hilarious and great fun to read. Good job!

...Well...*implodes* O_o Its not too often that I find a person like you, who has that same weird sense of humor... And who can write, too.
Wel... I'll just be going now...

Hehe! I loved it! It kind-of reminds me a little of Douglas Adams' work. Very nice! The ending was a little abrupt, but overall I liked it *thumbs up*

niceness ... except for the whole ..canada thing

uber. just simply uber. need. more. now!

oh...my...goodness...
that's all i can say.

f-ing hi-larious ur amazing as a comedical genius... and as ... you

This is great!

This is an intriguing beginning...I really hope you plan to add more to this.

omg...this was so funny!