when i read it last time i didn't get a chance to review it so i wanna review it today! i really think it's a great poem! good work! still getting this publish thing right? it's just one of those poems that makes you think... over and over.. like your sign in name right now... i'll shut up now...

- Yi

Wow. The poem packs a punch, and is interestingly formatted, you make it so that one can reread and re-reread the poem, to see it a different way everytime. Absolutely wonderful.