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ludicrous louie 2005-04-02 ch 1, anon.	abusevery true...i know wut you mean by that.
kyokokrash 2005-01-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseI like it its definetely true!
A-wolf-called-Skya 2004-03-13 ch 1,	abuseHi! good poem! it flowed really good, i liked it! no critism for this one! I've FINALLY updated wind dancer. i was so stuck at one part, then i realized i couldn't keep her back much longer. you'll like this part, it makes the name make sense(at least, i think so) and i hadn't planned on adding it in. i was writing chapter ten, and i had just finished it, and my comp crashed!Grr! and microsoft word usually recovers it. IT DIDN'T! dumb comp... anyway,i guess i better start all over again. and i had to write a bunch of boring stuff, and i had reached an exciting part...and its gone!sniffles anyway, ttyl! Rachel.
TragedyLovesMisery 2004-01-25 ch 1,	abuseI like this poem. About your question...I thought you knew something about magic! wink..but then i realized that there is a line between magick and magic. Hecate is a goddess, the goddess of the crossroads and of witches, She is also associated with death. I'll post my Hecate poem on here in a bit. thanks for reviewing!
hyoutei jouou 2004-01-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseif you ever get left out by me you can always punch me ;) i like your story.
forgive and forget 2003-12-23 ch 1,	abuseI love your poem, its like a quote i really like: "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words."
rufflesia 2003-12-07 ch 1,	abusethe poem is so sweet. i like it! everything you expressed there is true. i read you bio and i saw that you are a anima fan, im also one. not totally a fan of them but i like watching it. if i'm not disturbing you can you review my story? it's in fantasy. i'm not urging you or forcing you but please do if you still have time. i'm not trying to be rude, okie.
topaz07 2003-12-05 ch 1,	abuseWow, wow, wow! This is such a great piece and it means to much to me! It really describes my feeling toward my friends. It's excellant!
amazingblazes 2003-11-29 ch 1,	abuseWow. This is good. Really good. Have you tried to get published yet? You should. Have a nice day!
Charna 2003-11-27 ch 1,	abuseThis poem reminds me of a RESPECT performance that happened at my school on Monday. It was a touching performance and it was good, this poem is kinda like that.
Song of Life 2003-11-26 ch 1,	abuseThats really good! So true! And true friends don't come around all the time so hold on to the ones you got!
Lainee 2003-11-24 ch 1,	abuseHi Fantwriter: I enjoyed your piece as it tells many truths. My suggestions for the ending is to move this part to the end of your piece. It is awkward where it is now. Move this section to end: Friends Are everything In my life I hope they mean As much In yours… - In this section I would make some changes as well. It’s hard to find Someone who’ll Listen, and not blab To the whole world About your troubles You’re lucky If you find such a person Someone Called A true friend The reason I suggest this is because throughout the poem you talk about a true friend that remembers you and not specifics about what makes a friend. Personally I think this should be changed all together to the effect of "someone who'll listen and remember not only to my troubles, but who I am." I hope these suggestions are helpful. This is a very calm, yet fragile piece. I enjoyed it very much. Peace

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