Nice... it sounds like a fable or fairytale... =]

How delightful! I loved this. It reminded me of the fairy tale East of the Sun and West of the Moon, one of my favorites, and the Greek story of Eros and Psyche. Forgive me for being frank, but I couldn't decide at the beginning whether it was hilarious and clever or amateurish. At length I decided I didn't care. It was well written and it was funny and I encourage you to write many more of these.

What a lovely fairy tale! LOL I loved it for its bluntness. The way you made everything straight to the point (like most fairy tales are) really worked well and even added to the humor. :) Great job. I wouldn't like this story any other way. ;) It's your style, and I think that it's fine the way it is.

Typo: "I'd rather marry Death himself than this murderous bastard."

(Hehe just thought you'd like to know)

"Now would you both please go home?"rofl. nice. it would be a lot nicer as a long story, however.

Eek! I love your sotry and gave me some inspiration for a story so thank you greatly for coming up with this ida. I just loved it and I'm kinda sad how short it was but it was realy worth reading! Well, best of luck to ya, and so long!

That was a good story. I do wish you had made it longer with more descriptions though.

that was so funny hahahaha! love it!

*grins* That was great! I love how you describe her beauty according to the times, rather than modern-day definitions, and the storyline was creatively familiar. Three thumbs up! (even though I only got two...)

Gryph

I think that this is a very good story. It is a little different for my tastes but i can see lots of other poeple loving it,

That was good story. Very fable-esque. Cool.

BAHAHA this was an awesome story! Very funny! :)

I loved this story! It was so cute, just like a fairy tale except sort of funny!

Woah. This was like one mix of fairytale and real life. Haha, I love it. Just had to review this one too.
Bye,
~Valerie

nice story

Well done. This story is very good in my opinion. Short and sweet, and right to the point. Funny, fantastic, clever, absolutely fabulous. Apart from my own story, this is the best one I have read on this sight. Well done!!
(Please review mine now!!)
Yours,
Lord Thaddeus Cartwright