this is a brilliant peice of writing :) its really inspiring and im very impressed :) xx

Wow. I am sorry. I had no idea. I can be so naive sometimes.
(Shirks, hides in corner, peeks out at you furtively).
i wanna be your Robin Hood, I want to steal away all your pain and exchange it for the glea President Bush gets at another million dollars raised when he is running UNOPPOSSED!!
It is pointless, all we can do to show these jerks off is that they cannot kill us off. We'll be THEIR cockroackes -- MWA-HAHAHAHA!
(sorry, i am sick, so i hope this makes sense. I wish I could converse with you, but AOL AIM is silent. serves me right. You will come on as soon as my EVIL selfish sister comes on, anyway)

Wow, this is actually really good. It's deep. i like it.

This is good
BUT, your lines are a little long and a little hard to follow.
other than that, it's a very clear, deep poem that conveys a lot of meaning, and I like that.
--counterpart