O_o whatever i could say would do it no justice. It is..you. This si right from your head, right from your insides and its great that you could pull it on to paper so beautifuly. It makes me want to give you hug becuse you look like you need one. I liek the first and second stanzas. Great great poem. with each poem i read you amaze me jsut a little more then you did that last time.

Angeorna the Goddess of Death

I like the idea of this, and the rhyme scheme if quite solid... a couple where it's a tad off, but such is every poem. A couple of spelling mistakes too, I'm sure you've spotted those now.

Enjoyed this, love the phrase "winter's autumn"

Mia