Again, the excellent imagery; I love it. The obsessiveish character's voice is most interesting, as well.

Gods I wish I could write as well as you! Beautiful, truly and deeply beautiful and well written. The descriptions were perfect, and you have a talent at first person. Wonderful piece of work!

Short and sweet, I like it. Excellent piece of work!

this is really good writing piece.. great description and display of emotions

I like your use of vision in this. . . but of course it means much more than that to me. This was really sweet. . . really beautiful. Reminds me of someone I know. . . hmm. . .