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Reviews For: You Don't See Me
rip17 2005-11-18 . chapter 1
okay that one was sad...very sad...i have a friend named Derek and that reminded me of him...i wish i could stop crying now...why wont the tears stop?lol good job! ~sTeF~
Insanity Da Best Policy 2005-04-17 . chapter 1
Aww! That was so sad - poor Derek. I'm not sure if I feel so much sorry for Sky as much I feel for Derek. Poor boy! God, wish he could have just told her before! Poor Derek and poor Sky too!

Nice story!
DarkAngelFallen 2004-01-31 . chapter 1
*Sniff sniff* Your makin me cry! So sad! ~
: A N G E L
Kelli 2004-01-16 . chapter 1
Oh my god. This story is so sad... My friend showed it to me, so without her I wouldn't be typing what i am typing now. LOL. Anywayz, I loved your story.
Aiwin 2003-11-30 . chapter 1
Good lord i actually cried! ur good, ur REALLY good. this is an awsome story i'm going to have to show my friends at school...
tearily,
KaTiE
Crunky87 2003-11-26 . chapter 1
aww.. story is sweet and sad all in one but u should put more meotional stuff in it so i ppl can shed tears :P
it's cute tho, the idea of it
Elizabeth Szorcsik 2003-11-26 . chapter 1
That is so sad! I like it a lot though. I almost cried...keep writing alright?
Melissa 2003-11-26 . chapter 1
*cries* Oh that was so sad! Poor Derek and Sky! Great ficlet!
bandgeeek13 2003-11-26 . chapter 1
WOW
that is really good
(sniff... sniff)
its so sad

~Me
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