Marc Gyver weaves a tale full of strange places...strange names...but filled with all feelings, thoughts and emotions that make being a human worth it.
My interest never flagged for a moment.
Keep writing, Marc Gyver!

Very well writen. This can go on me favs cos its so god. :)

I liked it...sort of.

Here's what I got out of that-

You are exceptionally good at creating a whole new culture, and the culture is brilliant! I loved it!

But at the same time, you dump us into the middle of the story too fast...we don't get time to understand all this new information.

Keep writing though, I loved it!