Is the poem swerving with the context, or is it just me? keep on writing.

Interesting. I like the calmness about it. Its eerie. And I just now understood why you typed like this (i think). It's supposed to look like swerving, no?

I like this. Very interesting format, actually. Was this a symbolism of something else, or is it 'what you see is what you get'? Meh, whichever it is, you still did a good job. Keep it up.

I dont think this poem really has to do with cars..
But.. I didnt like that u mention cars that much..

but I like this one anyways..