|Reviews for Together|
| Incubabe 11/26/03 . chapter 1
This is great, my fave line(s) has to be:
"You are impracticality/In burning pink" - that is just an amazing image.
| Sarah-Angel87 11/26/03 . chapter 1
very well written, the flow is very good and it can be flexed to mean different things, but the main message is there. you did a very good job and I hope to see more from you soon.