hmm... havent seen an idea like this before, very original. i like it. especially the lack of pronouns, and the simple rhythm, nicely written, very good.

I know this is depressing, but there's a bit of melancholy and boredom to it... even overriding the depressing aspect of the ending and such.
Very nicely done. I like when poems are written on such simple details as this.
Nice.

very sad, but i think everyone has days like that

That was a good poem, well done. It's e-really sad and touching.

Very nice.

hey, i like your poem. It is nicely written i say. i can relate to it...