This was a good poem. I liked it.

...wow...it was really kinda choppy...and u must really like punctuation...all those commas and periods r unnecessary...however, it was interesting seeing a diff. suicide poem...mine is not like this at all...my poems have a completely diff. style...

This is really good...but sad. Is this how you really feel? Maybe you should talk to someone you know about it. But the first step for fixing your problems is writing (at least for me) so keep writing!

Wow! This is really something I've never read before. Very Nice. It's got loads of meanings hidden underneath and I think you did a nice job.

hey, thanks for reveiwing my poem-ness. this is excellent, but theres a typo (sorry cuz i'm a proofreading freak >xD): "At why its come to this" But who cares. we all write suicide poems, dont we. i wrote one, its called The Solution. neway, this has been a long annoying reveiw. bai!! -andromeda

aww what the hell all your poems are ** because you are a ** person who doesnt know how to be nice.You critize my work just because you can't write yourself.

I like the way you have set this out, very interesting.

i coudn't have said it better myself, i loved it. It really shows the feelings one has.

I like the way you first stated an emotion and then sort of...explained it, eh? Anyway, I really like how it's written. You really get the point across and the severity of these emotions.Well done!

Pretty intense :D You're not really considering it though are ya? I wrote a suicide poem or two. They're pretty interesting huh? But this is exactly how I felt any time I ever considered it! Very nice =D
~Greeny

I really like that, God it is so hard to review poems.

wow.. very sad.. i love the format too... very powerful awesome poem

oh cool. a simple message in such nice format. short lines are good coz they don't make your brain work much. keep writing.

I like this. The format is awesome. Overall the poem is nicely put together.

AC

I loved your poem. I can relate to it kinda.