haha I notice you wrote this like ages ago but i'm reading it anyways because I can!! it was amusing but i got on to what you were talking about (due to the fact that i just lost to a match with my brother...no surprise). Ok well nicely done at any rate

how rude...Why did David go and throw you into checkmate?...the nerve of some people...you should check out my poem called "Strategy"...only if you want to I mean, It's about a game of chess also.

lol, I like. I am THE worst chess player in the universe. Guaranteed you'd beat me. btw, thanks for the comment.

cute ;) thnx 4 the review

lol thats cute keep writing!

lol! humorous, I like it

Haha! This is really funny. It's like I thought something exciting was going to happen, and then it's just "Checkmate"! You should write some more. Your short stories are humorous, but simple. It's really nice.

hehehe...neat poem...muchly cute. i've never been too good at chess. you were talkin' about chess, right? hehehe, thank you VERY much for reviewing "Lost Jewel". oh, and that reminds me...*beaver digs through her bag and pulls out a cookie* here, this cookie belongs to you. *wink* keep writing...you're stuff is good.
~Beaver

haha that was cool

Cute, but a little obvious. :-) Have fun writing!

Hehe,m well done, nice, and thoughtful poem. I liked it a lot. Very nice, very nice. Keep writing!

If you can, plz r and r some of my poems, it means a lot to me

Thanks!

OMG! That is so funny. I love the ending!! Great Work!