That is a really pretty poem! I don't usually like when poems rhyme, but you seem to make it work.

Very good! Keeps the reader interested, and the title is beautiful, too.

Great poem! I am looking forward to reading the rest of them!

i love your elemental poetry. you seem to almost know nature, as if it was a person. hm.. good job.

YAY! WATER! LOL as you can see, i've changed my penname and i think it suites me, whatcha think?

Very cool way to describe water.
Heart of the Sword

I like the last too rhymes. You've got a really good rhythm and rhyme pattern to that. Well done!

Hum...Very interestin, well written poem. I like it, I like it. And I understand this poem well too. Great job! Keep writing!

If you can, plz r and r some of my poems, it means a lot to me

Thanks!