|Reviews for The Forever Pure Element|
| hazelspirit 10/3/11 . chapter 1
That is a really pretty poem! I don't usually like when poems rhyme, but you seem to make it work.
| Unholy Haven 3/26/05 . chapter 1
Very good! Keeps the reader interested, and the title is beautiful, too.
| aireona93 7/1/04 . chapter 1
Great poem! I am looking forward to reading the rest of them!
| brunette 12/13/03 . chapter 1
i love your elemental poetry. you seem to almost know nature, as if it was a person. hm.. good job.
| mizu no kokoro 11/30/03 . chapter 1
YAY! WATER! LOL as you can see, i've changed my penname and i think it suites me, whatcha think?
| Keep it 100 11/28/03 . chapter 1
Very cool way to describe water.
Heart of the Sword
| lebuffle 11/27/03 . chapter 1
I like the last too rhymes. You've got a really good rhythm and rhyme pattern to that. Well done!
| LegendaryPunk29 11/26/03 . chapter 1
Hum...Very interestin, well written poem. I like it, I like it. And I understand this poem well too. Great job! Keep writing!
If you can, plz r and r some of my poems, it means a lot to me