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| she smolders 2007-04-06 ch 1,  | abuseI don't know what to say after reading this, it was so touching and the story breaks my heart. Take care. |
| Narcotic-x-Poppies 2005-11-04 ch 1, | abuseWOW.. very nice. i loved the flow of this, it was perfect. |
| Love Me CrayziE 2005-04-16 ch 1, | abuseim on a roll, seems im finding all of fictionpress' best today. i adore your writing. and the character in this story. -summ |
| Harajuku Girl 2005-01-05 ch 1, | abuseReading this made me wonder... if everything that I have ever written was a lie. You've amazed me. |
| do not resuscitate 2004-09-26 ch 1, | abuseoh my god... i'm not sure what to say. there's no possible way to review this- it's just too perfect. i can compliment it, fiercely. this was beautiful i loved the very end, it just resonated in my mind. |
| wingless 2004-03-22 ch 1, | abuseyour writing is like poetry and music and beautiful paintings covered in sparkles all seen through spiderweby beautiful realness. i love this. i love your writing. nothing could improve this |
| Ashley D. Porter 2003-12-28 ch 1, | abuseEverything you write I read. Over and over. And bloody hell somewhere in there I forget to review. This is a really harsh piece of work. I feel that harshness. It's so awesome how the message was conveighed. And this: And the next morning, I threw Your ashes Into the Pacific, for Hollywood to find. That just sums it all up. Bloody beautiful. -Oriana Amadis |
| the cereal killer 2003-11-30 ch 1, | abuseFrancesca Lia Block is God. You must have fallen from Francesca Lia Block heaven. My parents are yelling at me to go down for dinner, but reading this has made me full. I don't want to go but I have to. And before I go I want to tell you that: I loved this. I really did. |
| Blood And Brown Sugar 2003-11-28 ch 1, | abuseHm...you really gave me a feel of the characters, especially Galileo. I like the manner in which you develop your characters and unveil them to the reader. |
| Trevor 2003-11-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseit was good. like god, but better then that. ~Trevor |
| 2046 2003-11-26 ch 1, | abusewow it was very intense very moving |