Whoa. I can't think of a way to describe this. I love it, it's a very deressive yet true poetry on life. Well done!

Yup, I like your style of writing.

I really like this one, so in depth that it's beautiful, yet frightening at the same time. Looks like I have a new favorite

A sad yet moving piece. I love the imagery that you get from reading this poem. This is excellent work.
~hamsta-gurl

this is an incredibly deep and moving piece, although simply and quite elegantly written although i still have to say that occasionally you force rhymes into your work where you don't need to, remember if it won't rhyme normally don't force it cause it'll just disrupt the flow, this isn't much of a case in this but maybe you should try some free verse poetry? rhyming couplets do work well but not always, try to get away from that habbit if you can and use rhymes as sparingly as possible, a good rythmn is always better than a poem full of rhymes... sorry if this sounds really negative but its not meant to be cause i really like this piece simply because its filled with emotion yet with such an elegant writing style that it doesn't seem overly broody and overpowering
taffy

good poem... i really like it... plz r&r some of my stuff if you get the chance... thanks:)