DONT DO THAT! I THOUGH KIETH DIED YOU LOSER!! URG!

haha that last part was so funny!!

This story is so cool and ive only read 1 chapter!

I am so Confused I thought Keith was in critical condition. But I love your story non-the-less

wo *cries* i love it! its brill! me wantie!! *grabs all men and lines them up* who to pick...

wow. that was really good. who were the shooters anyway?

it's not STOLE, it's STOOL. it's not "another women" it's "another womAn"!

sorry to be so mean about but seriously, there are a LOT of errors in here.

you were only 13-14 when you were writing this?? no wonder there's such bad grammar mistakes. nonetheless, good story :]

yay thank you so much ! i would have cryed if you hadda made keith die :( *sigh* even tho you say that you dont like the dark and gloomy storys, you wright them really well, i was really into it lol like all your other storys *sigh* i dont think that i will rest untill i read all the storys that you have written :P

i love you you used my last name for the story do you know anybody by the name of Ice or did you just find the name some where

i'm confused, what happened to her mother being an artist and her dad being a lawyer and both really rich then dying and her and her brother living with their greedy aunt and uncle??

i really liked the story up until the last chapter, but other than that is was a good story :)

wow. that was so heavy. it explained heaps. poor justin. god, im amazed she doesnt have more wrong with her. lol.

insomniac, anorexic, depressive and a cuter. i think she sould be in an instutution, or a hospital maybe. can any one person have something more wrong with them?apart from that i liked it. spelling is no biggy in my book either, coz i suck at it to. lol. we should start a club.

kool, but eah about the cutting thing and the insomia. if she's has insomia doesn't she get tired in the morning? and the cutting what happened to her?? along with the anoxia. how long has she been doing things like that?? and won't they kill her??