*Whistles* Wow, awsome and amazing use of the song. ^.^ I happen to love this song, and I really like your songfic. Very nice!\.

Hum... I like it but other than that, I really dunno what to say.

Hmm. A truthful battle. Ya know, I heard that song today... A tad muffled through the wall, but I still heard it. ^^
Hmm. Truth always finds us. ^^ Persistant, because we cannot live without it. And in the end, we really don't want to. Christianity is like lipgloss and chapped lips. The longer ya go without putting chapstick on your chapped lips, the worse they get. But if ya put chapstick on it (though it really stings at first) it gets better. But ya haveta do it often, or else...chapped lips. ^^ >.< I'm really profound, ne?
Great. My sister says that sounded like our pastor. Ah well. It made sense to me.
About the story: Quite good, very truthful and simple, and yet very profound. Why is it I find myself needing to think long and hard after I read most of your stuff? Talent, perhaps. ^^ Must trot now, however. Kudos!