itsthe best story in the world,man i cannot wait to hear more from it!

Eh. There. Reviewed. Happy, Adam?

A good story, can be boring at times,
some parts did not make sense (grammatical errors), and more of a description on the colony might make the story more interesting.

I have now got a gun to my head for a good review.
For my own well-being I must say it was an interesting story with lots of character and description.
The characters were coulourful in variety and had a good range of personality.
I'd read the rest if it were to be finished.
Is that alright Adam?

Nice story you've got started up here. Keep working on it, and put some more chapters up!

by: youknow who 4)4\/
well not to be mean or anything but the first chapter is boring! ok i will read the next one now. Keep writing