|Reviews for The New World|
| Vipertooth 8/17/05 . chapter 1
itsthe best story in the world,man i cannot wait to hear more from it!
| The New Einstein 3/15/04 . chapter 1
Eh. There. Reviewed. Happy, Adam?
| Tom 12/10/03 . chapter 1
A good story, can be boring at times,
some parts did not make sense (grammatical errors), and more of a description on the colony might make the story more interesting.
| Benadict Collins 12/9/03 . chapter 1
I have now got a gun to my head for a good review.
For my own well-being I must say it was an interesting story with lots of character and description.
The characters were coulourful in variety and had a good range of personality.
I'd read the rest if it were to be finished.
Is that alright Adam?
| Anubis 12/9/03 . chapter 1
Nice story you've got started up here. Keep working on it, and put some more chapters up!
| Black Orpheus 11/30/03 . chapter 1
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well not to be mean or anything but the first chapter is boring! ok i will read the next one now. Keep writing