So talented *shakes fist* I love this so much, its so well written and the ideas are just uber creative, im so jealous of you!

Going from poetic lines to rhyming kind of throws it off, but it's entirely creative nonetheless and a great duet to boot. I'm supposing Ashley wrote the part about Mae West. Very clever.

So, RSK and I were IMing, I just came up with that first phrase. I then invited her to do a kind a duet, impromptu like freestyle rap! She balked, saying she was not creative.

See the results! Look how much better her contributions are here! And I am no slouch (wink).

SO sessky and alluring her images are.

You did I great job here, A! I was only here to guide you. You really deserve MORE reviews! Don't worry, only the really great artists were not recognized right away!

At least some people like me and your younger sister see!

::cuddles:: i wuv u for perservering and suffering thru!

YAY Ashley! (P.S. after much deliberation, I came up with the title and she approved, like no likey? I didn't think I'd EVER come up with a title, man!)

This is...
Actually very beautiful.
John is a great writer.
I think I'm more fond of your style.
No offence, John.
;)