Great poem.
The words you string together in this poem fit so well together and flow as a stream (cheap plug of my poem, heh).
Also, I am sorry about not reviewing your prose in December. More things came up than I expected. But this first month shouldn't be too hetetic(sp?) so I hope I'll get a chance.
Anyway, once again, great poem.
Cheers.

interesting...
much like many other poems I have read, and then, a little bit different. kudos do you for making it your own.
the first stanza really packs very little punch, and leaves me wondering what more you could do with your words. you do build up however, which is a redeeming quality. not bad!

Pfft, like you're any different from the rest of us? I got a bunch of holes in my body. Nine on me. And that's with no piercings.

You know, I'd like to be able to say something here, some fancy poetry critique and something respectful to the writer and their work. But I can't. I just can't. It isn't me and it isn't my style, but above all, I just can't. So I'll just be honest and straightforward - it was good.