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| Queen Anabella 2007-06-10 ch 1,   | Aw, how sad. :( |
| atreyu love 2007-04-08 ch 1, | its really sad :( but good all the same. |
| The Latest Plague 2006-05-16 ch 1, | this is hot! i love this! its just so deep and WOW! i am jelous of your mad writing skills! lol i'm adding this to my favorites list! |
| Anotherlovesickteen 2005-03-23 ch 2, | Screw what that reviewer said i think this is one the sweetest stories i have ever read and i go on this site every day! |
| Sokorra Lewis 2004-06-16 ch 2, | Interesting story. When did it take place? another question I have is Was the Pharaoh a real pharaoh or one you made up? eitherway, it was a good one-shot. Kori |
| nahbia 2004-01-02 ch 1, | Very emotional. |
| Plato's Optic Runaway 2003-12-04 ch 2, | ... ...Oh wow... This...I...this is...beautiful...much different than your usual works, though it still retains the tone of sweet, bitter melancholy so signature of you, it's harsher than your general things...(not to place a stereotype to you dear; you hardly fit into one). Anyway. ...Ah, too much to say in one tiny box. The imagery you use is impeccable; enchantingly and sorrowfully divine; the end result almost reminiscent of a burnt out star...personally I would say this transcends anything else I've read by you, actually by quite a step. (And yes, I am getting around to your fanfictions, but...craploads of personal turmoil to deal with...) To comment: what gave that indivdual the idea of early new kingdom...? Nothing in here suggests a distinct time period, (I rather liked the pretty vagueness of the entire work, when reading it one sort of feels like one is wandering through a moonlit mist, but it grows thicker, darker, more evil by the end...I don't know; I'm in a very strange mood at the moment...) though, I did wonder why you named the prince Aten, a title of one of the Gods. Actually, he was proclaimed the the sun god (and sole god of Egypt) during the reign of Akenaten- oh, THAT might've been why the person assumed a time period for the story. He did rule in the early New Kingdom, hon. Heh, perhaps you should look into things before bashing on someone. But anyway: wondrous work; I look forward to some updates in other works/new stories. (That was the polite form of UPDATE, DAMN IT!) Eheh, I'm done. ::coughs herself to death:: |
| parakiss caroline 2003-11-29 ch 1, | awesome story! i loved it, Egypt rocks! |
| sakura 2003-11-29 ch 2, | So you are going to write more. Can't wait. Update soon. |
| Sorato4ever1 2003-11-29 ch 1, | wow, that was so sweet and sorrowful at the same time. what's the word...bittersweet. That's how i would describe this story. Very beautiful. |
| Punk'd 2003-11-29 ch 1, | God...I'm so JEALOUS of YOU! u write so bloody well... check my fic it's called Daughter of the Devil and kudos to Tom as well! |
| Bob n Kazzi 2003-11-29 ch 2, | Bob: Someone ** Ishuzu off! Hoo hoo they are in for it, lol. *hits Bob* sh! Tell 'em Ishuzu, and I am sending b a a a a a a a a a ad vibes. >. |
| nagenya 2003-11-28 ch 1, | Ah...a little corny and cliche at the end, but still the lines "I was your refuge...am I still? etc." is very touching...overall it is a pretty good story. :-) |
| Bob n Kazzi 2003-11-28 ch 1, | You smeghead you didn't tell me you were posting a story - this is beautiful. Gorgeous and excellent. Bob: *wipes a tear* Superb. I love this Ishuzu. And we luv u guys! Group hug! *Bob n Kazzi run at Ishuzu n Tom* |
| sakura 2003-11-27 ch 1, | That was really sad. What's going to happen next? Was that the end? Can't wait to find out. Update soon. Thanks. |