bit confusing but still good

This is so good! Is this like a one chapter thing or can you update?

wow. well it is intersting!!

hey, this is really good. are you going to continue? it's very well-written. keep up the good work. :)

Hi! Great start to a story... very non-linear which is harder to write, but more interesting to read. Even though you haven't gone much into your characters yet, I can already get a sense of who they are. I hope you continue.
BTW: Thanks so much for the reviews! I almost flipped when I saw my count double... I'm not used to getting 9 reviews at a time! I'm glad you like my story, I do too, so I will definately be updating. I've never seen Crossroads, so I am neither offended by the comparison or worried that I subconsciously ripped off the story :)
Cheers!