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| nine iron 2004-04-27 ch 1,   | Nice poem, lines are a little long for my tastes but it still gets the point over. A little confused but thats probable because the lines are too long again. Nine Iron |
| Sweet-kisses04 2004-03-15 ch 1, | I love this poem. Like I said about the last one I commented on, I really can relate to this. As soon as I read it I said, "This is exactally how I felt once." |
| fong-jai 2004-03-08 ch 1, | wow lookin back on these dates of when you wrote them its prety long time ago man... i dislieks this poem! hopefully yor not reffering to yourself.. though i have a strong idea that it is. . . u alwayzz got me to TAKE OUT YOUR ANGER TO BASH abuse or even to cry too ... i know you'll be there when i want someone to scream abusive language at hehe ol JUST JOKIN!... =รพ |
| ment 2004-02-09 ch 1, | well written and really angsty and tragedy-ish. you really have a way with turning feelings into beautifully written poems... |
| BluEyes1 2004-01-25 ch 1, | yeah, thats the truth and the truth does hurt. and thanks for the review back, i really appreciate it. it kinda depressed me more, to tell you the truth, lol. but today was just one of those days, ya know? and i still appreciated it. and i dont mind babbling. cuz i kind of tend to...if you havent noticed,lol...but anyway, i really liked this. it was short, but it still said so much. |
| Cooties 2003-11-27 ch 1, | That's really sad! I really liked it though! |
| Talimkun 2003-11-27 ch 1, | yeah the truth does hurt eh? would you say this is written from a naieve knew the to cruel world point of view? well even if it isnt i enjoyed it! |