You did a great job on this, I like how you made the character seem ordinary and unique at the same time, perhaps you could give me some advice on my poems in the fic "Welcoming Darkness" I have yet to reach your level of skill.
Toki Kibbles _

Wow. That's really beautifully written and I love the concept. It sounds like a short story.

This is an excellent piece. The fourth stanza is positively awesome. "covered
with her steady palmprints and
ink smears like remnants of nightfall." Those lines taste beautiful. And the lack of angst makes me want to dance.
Excellent work _