That is so beautiful. I know how you feel, too. This is definitely one for my favourite stories list, I just love it, you're very talented. :)

how sweet.

Beautiful. I loved howe it unfolded into a more exaggerated detail of forbidden love...

Hey you have an interesting nmes.. oh and this poem is really good and really well written and I just have to say that I love it!

i've said basically the same thing about...god how many girls now?
"The whisper of you name\ can put me in a trance" makes me think of one in particular. man, i really liked her too.
many people prolly think this is weird, cause i'm a straight dude and i like all this emotional stuff, but w\e. good work.

Cute poem. I loved the last few verses and the way you rhymed. Kepp it up.
~SwimmerGirl~
Swimming for love but lost at sea
A swimmergirl I'll always be

Aw! I love it! That was 100% beautiful!
Ps: Thank you so mch for reviewing all my poems and liking them! I tried to go on that vwebsite you said about getting rhyming words but it didnt work (I would have emailed you about it buy your email address is hidden)

Wow, thats great! The kind of thing i'd love to write. I Haven't had a chance to read the rest of your poems yet but i'll just have to make the time because this is such an amazing first poem. Keep it up!

I know how this oen feels. Great poem, keep at it.